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AKK
Date: 2009-05-10 22:19
Subject: FM-PMS
Security: Public
Location:on DW
Mood:busy
Tags:fm-pms, outtakes

current chapter word count: 3504
scenes worked on today: Yue's Watch, Akiko's fright
scenes done?: Yue's Watch (aside from tinkering of course)
amount of chapter considered done: 85 - 90% (plotwise, discounting tinkering)
scene(s) missing plot: Omi on the phone
scene(s) with multiple gaps: Akechi, Akiko's fright
character who's getting along surprisingly well with his "prey": Subaru
character who does the same with his "former prey": Yue
character in for a surprise because of that: probably Sei
research of the day: samurai history, bushido, eta
quote of the day: "I don't care about the Sakura's approval!"


Small outtake that sadly doesn't fit the mood between Subaru & Yue anymore:

"A final question: Why do you keep calling him 'Sei-chan'?"
"I'm fourteen-hundred years his senior. If that doesn't qualify for '-chan', I don't know what does." Yue smirked. "Besides, it's perfect to piss him off."

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AKK
Date: 2009-03-28 18:41
Subject: unused 36° scene: "Dennis"
Security: Public
Mood:crazy
Tags:36°, fanfic, outtakes

Someday, I will compile a "production outtakes"-file for 36° and Family Matters and collect all these snippets!

Until then, have fun with 36°'s "Dennis the Menace", in which Subaru reads Seishiro's analysis of the upcoming end of the world, the new millennium, and Baby Jesus. [Warning: strongly religious people may find some of Seishiro's thoughts (like most of X, likely) disturbing]

36° outtake: Dennis the Menace )

This is one of the scenes I was really sad about not finding a place in the fic for it. :)

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AKK
Date: 2009-01-06 16:06
Subject: FM-PMS
Security: Public
Mood:quixotic
Tags:deletion, family matters, fanfic, fm-pms, outtakes

Sometimes when writing a fic you have a scene for a late chapter, written almost at the beginning. You grew fond of that scene, played with it, endorse, giggled, whatever about it. And when you finally come to the chapter it is intended for, you realize that the minuscule changes from the original plan accumulated over the last 16+5 chapters and the mood no longer fits. Sometimes, you can salvage the scene, sometimes not. Sadly, "Hotaru's caterpillars" are a case of the latter. It was deleted this morning. At least the rest reads better now.

beware 410 unedited, unpolished words )

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